Saturday, 11 October 2008

Task 29 Iambic Meter

1. I dont know where to go so lets have a look. Part1
2.I want to learn how to play the tambourine.
3.The wind will always blow so gently here.
4.I dream of playing football in my dreams.
5.I need to eat some food to keep me full.
6.I broke my arm and need to mend it know.
7.I need to keep on writing so that you can pleased
8.I shivered when i thought i heard a thief.
9.My power failed everuone who was with me.
10.A storm was coming nearer towards me.
11.Now i need to keep myself content and free.
12.My hazel hair is soft as a pillow
13.should i take the green pill or the blue pill.
14.I dream of going to space if only they chose me.
15.I have no strength to fight a war that nobody will win
16.The wind will blow with powerfull strength
17.winter is the time to play with all the snow.
18.The sun will shine and shine and shine and shine
19.iI love the winter time but only whan it snows.
20.I saw a bird fly over my head towards me.

Part2

Outside the window

1.The sky is grey. It cries,
but later its happy.

What I like to eat

2.Chicken is nice, but
hang on chips are better.

A recent dream

3.It felt so real. My hands, my head,
and my feet were shaking

Annoying tasks overdue

4.Work at school and chores at
home. There is no time to
breathe.

My Body

5.I run. I sweat. I lose control.
There is no place to go.


Task 29

Melissa saw a huge and hazel eye

To cast a massive role in four plays
I need to be a good mistress very fast

Lots of pedestrians throw litter

William Shakespeare wrote lots of plays

I hate to be the first person at the cinema

Friends that you can trust and keep can turn

My family is fun but boring for some

The trout was more familiar with more fish food

A rather large tortoise came behind me

It's wings viciously swoops above my skull

His lashes can curl up higher than his

The five children could not figure out the sum

The Witch couldn't cast a spell on her properly

If only she was more confident

It's time to focus more on working now

The beach gets really crowded so wait now

The sound is loud i think you should turn it down

The lap top would not turn on for the man

Please can you come park with us lot now

1 Outside the window
The rain cries.It's drops droops low.
Like depressed women in a symmetry. I sympathise.

2 What I like to eat.
No pepper in Grenada. Instead
They Have Plantain it's heavenly

3 A Recent Dream
It was terrifying. Full of fear
Me fearful of the truth that hurts

4 Annoying tasks overdue
The flo was to difficult
I guess its going to be a detention

5 My Body
The stomach turned inside out
Butterflies.Itching Inside of me.






task 29

Task 1

1. I wish that summer came all year round, i wish!
2. If time stood still, this life would be so cold.
3. I dont see fear as clear as those who fight.
4. we owe so much to those who fought the war
5. describe how we can help ourselves survive
6. my eyes gaze up in search of strength from god.
7. i gaze at you; your eyes enchant my mind
8.perhaps i dont belong with those i hate.
9. my thoughts survive despite my minds command
10. alot depends on how i stage myself
11. towards the end it felt i'd just begun
12.how time can pass so quick without you here
13.if love can hurt so much, why chase such love
14.i dream of dreams i dreamt when i was youmg
15. suppose we found this life we live werent real
16.a force lies deep within my soul and heart
17.as thoughts flow through my head i feel confused
18.you broke my heart, it's been repaired
19. as yet i feel iambs still cause me trouble
20.i have the strength to fight my fears till death.

Task 2
outside the window
i watch and gaze within. unaware im there,
i see them sad and laugh.if only he saw

what i'd like to eat
at first my eyes were drawn towards the cake
the cream the taste the smell. but then: the fat

a recent dream
i dreamt a dream:of doves and guns it sounds
quite wierd but dreams are meant to be sureal

annoying tasks overdue
my eyes fall down my head hangs low.A task!
a task to hard, to long to do when dead.

my body
my face. it once was seen as art; but now
it bares the scars of youth.And cuts of love



Task 29

Part 1

1. Some say it is hot but I am freezing.
2. Adisa the Verbaliser was good.
3. I find it hard to rhyme with out rocking.
4. My bag fell in to a puddle its wet.
5. How can I cope with all this stuff you throw.
6. My flowers never survive the winter.
7. My shirt is sweaty on my back today.
8. My head feels like it will implode tonight.
9. Your socks are a very deep shade of pink.
10. The dinner’s getting very cold today.
11. The table lamp is very hot to touch.
12. Without my iphone life was super dull.
13. The lights are on but no one’s home today.
14. You are my beautiful little baby.
15. She always said you were irritating.
16. My mother always said, “Eat your green beans”.
17. My book is sitting on the shelf unread.
18. The lovely flowers are in bloom today.
19. My table is as hard as molten rock.
20. Sir makes us learn iambically this way.

Part 2

Outside the window
A tree sways. The autumnal breeze makes the
leaves fall down. They won't ever recover.

What I’d like to eat
At times I love jellybeans, they make me
smile and feel that life is truly worthwhile.

A recent dream
I smile but it’s not funny, my ruby
lips deceive you all, over and over.

Annoying tasks overdue
My rubber waits. O! to erase this line
from the page that taunts me all my hours.

My body
When you walk past me everyday I
Always shake and quake. Now please hit the brakes!

Task 29 - That can't be late

Part One

I thought this task was going to be ok,

Now I realise that that was a mistake.

Now I see that this is quite difficult

And this is going to take some of my time

Much more then I managed to put aside

But maybe this will teach me to rethink

The difficulty level of these tasks

And teach me to put more then this aside

The one way round this is to just revise

Iambic stuff I learnt awhile ago

So maybe this will help refresh my mind

So maybe I’ll learn to beat the deadline

And get ahead in all this metre stuff

Cause then I can put all of it aside

And spend sometime to concentrate on me

Instead of spending it all on my work

Plus this will help me in my future tasks

Learning the skill to be on perfect time

While still keeping sometime for me, myself

I’ll concentrate on my upcoming tasks


Part 2

Outside the Window

The sky above lets out an angry noise
Then heavens open then let out the rain.

What I’d like to eat

The Barbeque-ey taste stays in my mouth
Reminding me that pizza huts the way.

A recent Dream


I walked I tripped and then somehow I fell
Right into hell but I could not escape.

Annoying tasks overdue

The constant emailing that never stops
Familiar names that constantly crop up.

My Body

My skin, my face the parts I must accept
But flaws that I sometimes let lead the way.

Behind closed doors.




1.My life revolves around Iambic verse.
2.Creative writing does my head right in’.
3.If ‘work for idle thumbs’ meant this, I’m stuffed.
4.The crack cocaine engulfs his futile self.
5.Deoxyribonucleic acid rules!
6.Pulsating blankly, leaving all behind.
7.The world obeys me, time slows lazily.
8.He failed English, many mock his work.
9.For many people, life is the abyss.
10.He was mere inches clear of certain death.
11.McDonalds really needs inspecting.
12.Now I am close to meeting destiny.
13.In victory lies joy unlimited.
14.Within defeat lies charted defiance.
15.Inside most acronyms lie obscenities.
16.In life you either make or break the rules.
17.If life were politics, we’d all be fish.
18.What's mine is yours, and what is yours is mine
19.I really don’t want iambs in my brain.
20.If Churchill were in charge we’d all be fine.

1. Outside the window.
I witness power. Tearing men themselves
limb for limb, then eye for eye. No morals.

2. What I’d like to eat.
The humble chicken, is the butt of many
jokes. What do you tend to choose, leg or breast?

3. A recent dream.
I recently was visited by my
old inner caveman, he was hypnic too.

4. Annoying tasks overdue.
Once upon a time, I got stuck on task
Five. Playing with the temper of the Man.

5. My body
Thy heart beats, freely within thy chest. Since
ne’er did I see such a fair maiden.

Task 29

It hurts to look; you’ve gone so far from me.

The past it holds on, never letting go.

It shines so bright yet darkness stays all night

A mistake, took you away from my path.

I feel the pain it’s growing inside me.

A secret, keeps the real you apart from
Us all and hides you being truly found.

Your voice; it’s nothing but perfect in sound.

The truth it hurts, you want to hear the lie.

It’s hard to believe I’m not by your side.

Your smile it colours beauty through my life.

Your love, it’s gone. I’m left to wait and wait.

I’m like a riddle; difficult to solve.

It’s not the same but you won’t understand.

I thought you had the key but I was wrong.

It’s now too late and nothing can be done.

Your music plays and makes you want to move.

A problem always finds its way to me.

You sometimes hear and see what’s not been there.

I walk all alone, somewhere no one knows.

1. Outside the window
The trees they wave at me in silence. Yes
They make it beautiful; a lovely view.

2. What I’d like to eat
Its ice cream that I want, it’s soft and melts
Like snow and reminds you of winter days.

3. A recent dream
It was too real. I stood too close that’s why
I fell off however it was a dream.

4. Annoying tasks overdue
It’s hard to find the peace when stress has no
End; papers suffocating you to death.

5. My body
My eyes is light in the most unclear fog
It’s big and bright; so special just for you.