Thursday, 19 July 2007

part of me

part of me is accost-never pushed around
part of me is lost-looking to be found
part of me is a book-more than just a cover
part of me is took-but i ain't no ones lover
part of me is at its prime-top of my game
part of me is mime- and not seeking fame
part of me is here-virtual and hot
part of me is near
but most of me is not


part of me is musical-singing in the shower
part of me is simple-like soil to a flower
part of me is on fire-blazing shining bright
part of me wont tire- an will continue to fight
part of me is Einstein-big brains and great mind
part of me is a sunshine-obvious but hard to find
part of me is dull-and will probably be forgot
part of me is evil
but most of me is not

part of me is wasted-and not completely useful
part of me feels hated- but i don't want to be cruel
part of me is tense-waiting to be sprung
part of me has sense-awaiting in my lung
part of me is hidden-deep within the itself
part of me's a vilian-but only to myself
part of me is mental-am i losing the plot?
part of me is a temple
but most of me is not

part of me is fearless-Knievel in disguise
part of me is anxious-a belly full of flies
part of me is curious-to know what lies ahead
part of me is an old man-lying in his bed
part of me is crucial-to what i do not know
part of me is Google-whatever you need to know
part of me dreadful-like a itching spot
but all of me is thankful
that most of me is not




2 comments:

  1. it makes sense 2 me lol

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  2. I love this!

    It is full of lines I WISH I had written myself...

    In fact, I was just looking through it, to find lines which particularly impressed me, and there were SO many I didn't know where to start.

    My favourite?
    1. part of me is fearless-Knievel in disguise / part of me is anxious-a belly full of flies
    2. part of me is Google-whatever you need to know
    3. part of me is musical-singing in the shower / part of me is simple-like soil to a flower

    A couple of your lines/couplets misfire a little, but for the most part this is wonderfully fresh, thought-provoking and inventive - and a very sophisticated response to the original model. Well done! :)

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