Love is the key to a rusted heart
Love isn't the end, but the start
Love is the cream on an apple Tart
Love is...
Love is a flower that lasts all year round
Love is not silence, but the sweetest sound
Love is the seed that lies in the ground
Love is...
Love is a bug, it will eat you inside
Love is a gift and will increase your pride
Love is a emotional strain of cyanide
Love is...
Love is the trigger to ecstacy and pain
Love is the priceless prize of the Game
Love is crop that grows on the plain
Love is...
Love is a heartbeat in a mothers womb
Love is the smile that liftens the gloom
Love is hope in the certainty of doom
Love is...
Love is a hand that guids your way
Love is a snowflake in the middle of may
Love is the Sun of everyday
Love is...
Love is a child with a brand new toy
Love is the tension between teenage girl and boy
Love is the child that is a bundle of joy
Love is...
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ReplyDeletethnxxxxxxx for your comment and btw i reallllyyyyy liked your poem too it was like realllyyy sweeeeeeet, ooooh and thnx for the posttterrr cnt waaaaiiit 2 c it
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Aww ur poem was so cute, I especially liked the last verse which I found funny in a very good way.Well done!
ReplyDeleteI loved this poem. It would have been so easy for the topic to lead to sickly-sweet, cloying verse (look up those words on dictionary.com if you're stuck) - but whenever that looks like happening, you hit back with something sharp (like the fantastic Line 11!!!).
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm is less secure - with the four-foot structure more confident in some stanzas than in others - but that doesn't detract from what is a basket brimming full with fresh metaphors, my favourite of which would have to be: "Love is the key to a rusted heart". Brilliant.