I need you like a gold digger needs dime
I need you like certain poems need rhyme
I need you like a clock needs time
To prove to sir that I'm never late
Like a country needs a state
I need you like flowers need the sun
I need you like kids need some fun
I need you like bullets need a gun
To show the weakness of men these days
Like humans need veins
I need you like a washing machine needs dirt
I need you like boys have a need to flirt
I need you like a suit needs a shirt
I NEED YOU
I want you like my brother wants a car
I want you like everyone wants a star
I want you like my sister wants a spa
To waste her money
Like Pooh wants honey
I want you like countries want to be sunny
I want you like all the banks want money
I want you like a kid wants bugs bunny
To have some fun and a laugh
Like tramps need a bath
I want you like a fat kid wants cake
I want you like my mum wants to bake
I want you like kitkat wants a break
I WANT YOU
I love you like cars love wheels
I love you like girls love heels
I love you like we love meals
And stuff our faces with food
Like Harry potter loves to be nude
I love you like boys love toys
I love you like my Pod loves noise
I love you like ‘Posh’ loves poise
To show off her stick figure
Like a man loves his cigar
I love you like a mouse loves cheese
I love you like monkeys love flees
I love you like siblings love to tease
I need you like bullets need a gun
To show the weakness of men these days
Like humans need veins
I need you like a washing machine needs dirt
I need you like boys have a need to flirt
I need you like a suit needs a shirt
I NEED YOU
I want you like my brother wants a car
I want you like everyone wants a star
I want you like my sister wants a spa
To waste her money
Like Pooh wants honey
I want you like countries want to be sunny
I want you like all the banks want money
I want you like a kid wants bugs bunny
To have some fun and a laugh
Like tramps need a bath
I want you like a fat kid wants cake
I want you like my mum wants to bake
I want you like kitkat wants a break
I WANT YOU
I love you like cars love wheels
I love you like girls love heels
I love you like we love meals
And stuff our faces with food
Like Harry potter loves to be nude
I love you like boys love toys
I love you like my Pod loves noise
I love you like ‘Posh’ loves poise
To show off her stick figure
Like a man loves his cigar
I love you like a mouse loves cheese
I love you like monkeys love flees
I love you like siblings love to tease
I LOVE YOU
This is excellent, and, try as I might, I can't find anything that needs improving (although Line 3 of the third stanza is weakened by only using the pronoun 'we' as your subject)...
ReplyDeleteIt is brimming with original and snappy similes, and your rhyming is full of style and flair too. My favourite? Too many to choose. "like Pooh wants honey" " like kitkat wants a break" "like humans need veins"...
Great stuff.
P.S. Although you do need to get over your obsessions with Mr Radcliffe in the altogether... :)
loool sir i WAS over it but then we discovered something (quite grim) that i just can't be removed from my head. :D
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