It’s dark tonight. Just hanging round a mates chilling and watching a film. It all went ok until he asked me. “You want some mate?”. This was completely out of the ordinary, I didn’t know he swung that way. I was flattered that he was willing to give but I didn’t want to ruin things. He didn’t seem to take no as an answer. He laid her on the table, she was hopeless, paralyzed. I didn’t want a criminal record. How could I touch her? She looked so hopeless, I wasn’t that kind of guy. He gave me a stern look pushed my head onto her. I was panicking, shitting myself to be honest. She was so white and soft. Laid there on a line. He whispered to me…
Clever use of suspense, with a powerful (and surprise) ending. Well done!
ReplyDeleteAlthough what happened to the 100 words/150 syllables bit?