Saturday, 1 December 2007

hate love miss

i hate you like a dog hates being denied its bone
i hate you like a teenager hates losing their phone
i hate you like ice cream hates the ominous cone
because he knows whats coming next
like and employee waiting for a text.
i hate you like the blacks used to hate the whites
i hate you like the atmosphere hates airline flights
i hate you like the morning and the sun hate the night
because there know it means an end
like a line turning into a bend.
i hate you like the "scousers "tend to hate the Neville's
i hate you like the "gunners" despise those "red devils"
i hate you like "lillywhites" hate their lack of medals.
i hate you

i love you like a child should always love their mother
i love you like a sister who looks up to her brother
i love you like a dog that has pups and wants another
encase this opportunity dosent come again
like an eclipse clear in the sky.
i love you like Santa loves up his mince pie
i love you like a pig loves its smelly sty
i love you like forever,even when you make me cry
because our love is forever
like McDonald and its Trevor.
i love you like Rooney at his best
like Kanye loves the West
like a bird and its nest
i love you

i miss you like a striker often misses goals
i miss you like a mole can easily miss holes
i miss you like tuna sarcastically misses rolls
lack of awareness
like a child saying he missed his parents
i miss you like an archer widely missed the mark
i miss you like love misses where it starts
i miss you like a bat would badly miss the dark
i miss you

1 comment:

  1. This is MUCH better. You have grasped the point of this task COMPLETELY, and have trotted off fresh and powerful simile again and again. This is excellent stuff, Sparky. Seriously.

    "I love you like forever, even when you make me cry" Beautiful.

    "like ice cream hates the ominous cone because he knows what's coming next" Strikingly original.

    Full of excellent writing (a few typos/spelling aside). Very well done!

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