Saturday, 21 July 2007

Me,Myself and I


Part of me is grateful-for all the things I’ve got

Part of me is hateful- for whom I’m naming not

Part of me is cheerful-I find happiness everywhere

Part of me is watchful

But most of me is elsewhere

Part of me is advisory- to all except I

Part of me is supervisory- with patience to the sky

Part of me is pretending-I’m in another sphere

Part of me is ascending

But most of me is elsewhere

Part of me is fighting –temptation and its friends

Part of me is writing – with all my lovely pens

Part of me is biased – I control what I see and hear

Part of me is focused

But most of me is elsewhere

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1 comment:

  1. englishguru21 July 2007 at 12:55

    When this is good, it is VERY good - although a few of the lines seem to have prioritised rhyme over meaning (if you see what I mean).

    I particularly like "Part of me is fighting - temptation and its friends", because of the personification in the second part.

    But are you certain there is a powerful thread running through it? And what do you mean, for example, by Lines 2, 5 and 6? I am a bit confused... :(

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