Thursday, 20 December 2007

LOVE IS........

love is the reason i want to die
love is the warmth i feel as winter passes by
love is the only reason to why i cry
love is...

love is the sugars in my tea
love is sweeter than the honey made by the bees
love is forever like the trees
love is...

love is what brings together you and me
love is friendship, without it where will we be
love is a padlock with an assigned key
love is...

love brings you closer to my heart
love is a feeling we can't live without
love is a promise that will never be apart
love is...

love is a feeling greater than the moon
love is a pleasure i hope to feel soon
love is the dreams i visualisevat noon
love is...

3 comments:

  1. Some excellent metaphors here - with several of them highly original too. Although I do think you are a little too constrained by the rhyme at times, with the effect that I sense you weren't completely comfortable with some of your word choices.

    Did you mean to invent a totally new word in your penultimate line though??? :)

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  2. the last line was suyposd 2 say visualised at noon

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