Part of me is Bad- Im the devil's little tool
Part of me is Sad- I always play the fool
Part of me's a Drunk- Wasted at sixteen
Part of me's a Punk- Life is just a dream
Part of me was Closed- I can't do that anymore
Part of me is Posed- Just another myspace whore
Part of me is pretty- Or maybe Im just vain
Parts of me I pity-
'cause most of me is Pain.
Part of me is Happy- But only for a while
Part of me is Chatty- Although sometimes that turns vile
Part of me is Craving- But not for what you think
Part of me is Wishing- Hoping I don't sink
Part of me's a Druggie- In need of another kick
Parts of me are Foggy- My mind likes to play tricks
Part of me is lifeless- Locked up with a chain
Part of me is careless-
But most of me is Pain.
Part of me is stupid- I never get it right
Part of me plays Cupid- I hate it when we fight
Part of me is Poetic- Most of my rhymes are in the bin
Part of me is Pathetic- I never seem to win
Part of me still loves you- That part always will
Part of me is Through- There is a hole you cannot fill
Part of me is Hate- don't call out my name
Part of me is Late-
But most of me is Pain.
Part of me is Crying- Mostly on the inside
Part of me is Dying- Swept away by the tide
Part of me is Sick- Twisted and obscene
Part of me's a Trick- Im not nice, Im mean
Part of me's Confused- What is the point to life?
Part of me feels used- It's a never-ending strife
Part of me has grown- But most parts are the same
Part of me has shown-
That most of me is Pain.
This is fantastic - and I am so impressed you are catching up on all the tasks BY CHOICE. There are a few points where the rhythm is a little awkward (it's all down to the number of feet, and some lines become a little syllable-crowded), but where the rhythm flows, so do some highly original ideas. And there are LOTS of them. And I am also impressed by the amount of emotional charge injected into every line. Seriously.
ReplyDeleteOh, and "just another myspace whore" has got to be one of the best lines of poetry on this blog!