Venus and Adonis
Venus:
You hurt me. So much....
But you know that.
You hurt me more than I can put into words,
You know that too.
Everytime you leave, I die a little bit more inside.
But you know.
You know you're the only one who can make it better
You hurt me so much, it hurts so good..
But you know, don't you?
Adonis
I hurt myself by hurting you...
But you know that.
I try my best to pretend I don't care,
You know that too.
I leave for hunting because it hurts to be near you,
beside you,
knowing what you have done,
We are falling apart...
but you know, don't you?
A clever and subtle juxtaposition of the two points of view. Well done.
ReplyDeleteJust need to get the painting in the post too - do you know how to do that, or shall I?
I did try, but the page wouldnt load >.<
ReplyDelete3 times I tried =[
I think you should do the honors sir [=