Task 29

Part 1
My life is full of exciting days now,
Before it was a grey cloud of dullness.
I like to sleep day and night, everyday,
Sometimes I can’t come out of my warm bed.
I like going on to the computer,
Though my mother thinks I have gone crazy.
I really like watching TV a lot,
Even though nothing exciting is on.
I’ve got a trampoline in my garden,
I like to jump, and jump, and jump, and jump.
On my fourteenth birthday I would like;
A big party in town hall with all my friends.
I like to eat chocolate it is yum,
I don’t mind it nutty or caramel.
I am part of the English workshop,
If I don’t finish this task by mid-night,
I’ll be in trouble with my mean teachers,
Evil Mr. Savage and Ms Ali.
I don’t like to skate I always fall,
I fall and hurt my bottom on the ice.

Part 2
Outside the window:
I look outside the window, I cry,
The world has turned into a massive bomb.

What I’d like to eat:
There is no cod in Pakistan, instead,
There is a whole lot of crunchy chicken.

A recent dream:
This has got to be a dream. I’m dying.
Please help me, there is fire everywhere.

Annoying tasks overdue:
Task 29. The deadline is mid-night,
What shall I do I haven’t finished yet.

My body:
My throat is dry, my forehead is sweating.
I think I am coming down with something.

Task 29

Part 1

1. The Sweet smell of Cooking food on Sunday
2. The shouting of school children on Monday
3. The kicking of a football Tuesday
4. All those things to come on hump day, Wednesday
5. Now we're getting closer to the end of the week
6. Friday is here thank goodness for all of that
7. Saturday is the day for having fun
8. Now we will begin at January
9. February the cold breeze on my neck
10. This month will make me smile spring is here, March
11. Easter, a time to celebrate in April
12. Baby lambs are rearing their heads, it's may,
13. June, the sweet fragrance of blossomed flowers
14. The end on school is near get ready, July
15. August, the heart of ,summer enjoy it
16. September school starts iambics to write
17. October this weather is getting cold
18. November has, hail, sleet, rain and snow
19. December decorate the Christmas tree
20. All these months will repeat themselves again.

Part 2

1. Outside the window
a flock of frozen passersby,crowded around
a scene of horror. A pool of blood.

2. What I'd like to eat
A mouth-watering piece of chocolate
that will go on and on, it is just so nice.

3. A recent dream
It Scared me to death; an eerie silhouette
that should have been on a horror programme.

4. Annoying task overdue
Oh no. This can't be true, it's
late again just one more day!

5. My Body
Its like a temple, just waiting
to be prayed in. Lets keep it going.

tAsK 29:

PART ONE:
1) The mermaid lived in the tropical sea
2) My grandmother bought me a bicycle
3) On saturdays i go to my nans house
4) I like to eat spaghetti bolognese
5) I saw a hippopotamus today
6) My mother reads me a bedtime story
7) The crocodile ate my beautiful shoe
8) The burgular stole my valuable chain
9) I dont care what people think about me
10) Im telling you i saw an alien
11) My camera phone fell in the grimy sea
12) I went on holiday to disneyland
13) I want to buy a yellow pencil case
14) I usually take a bath after school
15) I love to slurp coke in the cinema
16) I love to shop and spend all my cash
17) My little brother is a champion
18) I often felt neglected as a kid
19) I am not prejudice iam a worm
20) I feel proud to be a colourful worm


PART TWO:

What I'd like to eat

I like to eat spaghetti bolognese,
and when i do i throw it on the wall.

Outside the window

Outside my window there stands a small
girl. she weeps and shrieks until her nose turns big.

My body

My hair was whooshing through the
refreshing breeze. Who expected it to be so pretty

A recent dream

I dreamt about that evil and scary
witch again. She died.

Tasks overdue

I often get frustrated with my mum
because she doesnt help me with my tasks.

jaffer time!

Part One:

Sweeties are ridiculously awful
they're sugary and very bad for your health
And NO,the candy man can't. Cad bury fudge
I'm looking after Lucas, whens mum back
my course works getting harder each day F***
I'm missing Eastenders for work good choice
this sweet has the similar taste to soap
I'm now beginning to worry about my brother Lucas
oh damn! the sweets are all gone! I want More
Ive only got 9 lines to go I'm there!
cannot think properly my minds gone blank
I'm dreaming of bundles of pressies yay!!
blank blank blank blank blank blank blank blank blank blank
Would I look clever using 2 words twice?
Or would it just look lame and quite lazy
who uses that word lame? That sounds quite lame!
Look up Iambic verse on Internet
Do we seriously need to do poetry?
I have started to think iambically.

Part 2:

Outside the Window.
Outside my window, stands some kids with hoods
And matches setting fire to some cars.

What I'd Like To Eat.
I am incredibly hungry and I
would really like some food. Chicken and chips.

A Recent Dream.
I dream of news agents lecturing me
and stamping hard on my packets of fags.

Tasks Overdue.
Time flies when you have got to meet a dead line
but what makes it worse is I'm half dead.

My Body.
My body is a tardis. Tardis's
are bigger on the outside than the in.

Task 29

Part 1...

1. I sit on the cushion below my bum.
2. Photo on the window above: superb.
3. Computer at the shop looked good to me.
4. The world is but a big rotating ball.
5. At school I get so stressed sometimes for fun.
6. English is all about writing for free.
7. I go by the name Fizzy: simply said.
8. Perhaps us two should go to see the moon.
9. I, Fizzy, love to play cricket a lot.
10. My body loves to grow taller all day.
11. My eyes need rest because they hurt at night.
12. The tissue flew across the sky happy.
13. My heart felt hurt; it lay broken inside.
14. The fire grew big, the person died; alive.
15. The scar really had never felt this bad.
16. Library book was sent forward as well.
17. Rulers are good and accurate at times.
18. My back has pains and aches because it's bent.
19. The clouds look brilliantly white.
20. The man had worn a suit; secretly wise.

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Part 2

• Outside The Window

The train goes by on noisy tracks. It is

a train of few spiders walking swiftly.

• What I'd like to eat

I feel very peckish indeed tonight;

for birds require a peck or two a night.

• A recent dream

The stars had shone so bright and glowed so close

because i was an astronaut in space.

• Annoying tasks overdue

Forgetfulness reminds me that I have

to do my chores before i go to bed.

• My body

My teeth restrained by metal rods; begin

to irritate me by seeming ugly.

- Fizzy -

Task 29

I used to shine like a beautiful star,
Now it seem that my shine has been undone.
A love so strong to interfere with.
A grain of good inside the greatest bad.
It’s miraculous what a hug can do.
A hug can cheer you when you’re feeling blue.
It can bring smiles back to a faded face.
A hug can even soothe a small child’s pain.
We scarcely could survive without a hug.
A hug can delight and warm and charm you.
A hug is a priceless, beautiful thing.
So in your free time please give one today.
I prayed to god to send me an angel,
A couple of days later you arrived.
A friend’s indeed only when they’re in need.
Your gruesome features make me want to hurl.
To fall in love is something you should try,
Or get to try before the day you die.
You want to stab the girl in the heart,
This may be hate but this is just the start.
1.Outside the window
I see the bare branches. Autumn is here
The rustling of the crunchy brownish leaves.
2.What I’d like to eat
A huge chocolate cake. I would devour.
The lovely dark chocolate lined with icing.
3.A recent dream
The wind in my hair. The water beneath.
This falling sensation could not be real.
4.Annoying tasks overdue
Picture frames. Crying out to be dusted.
As they hang on the partially painted walls.
5.My body
Yes it’s different. Don’t mean that you will change it.
To hate or not to hate it’s up to you


By *miracles*

Task 29 Iambic Meter

1. I dont know where to go so lets have a look. Part1
2.I want to learn how to play the tambourine.
3.The wind will always blow so gently here.
4.I dream of playing football in my dreams.
5.I need to eat some food to keep me full.
6.I broke my arm and need to mend it know.
7.I need to keep on writing so that you can pleased
8.I shivered when i thought i heard a thief.
9.My power failed everuone who was with me.
10.A storm was coming nearer towards me.
11.Now i need to keep myself content and free.
12.My hazel hair is soft as a pillow
13.should i take the green pill or the blue pill.
14.I dream of going to space if only they chose me.
15.I have no strength to fight a war that nobody will win
16.The wind will blow with powerfull strength
17.winter is the time to play with all the snow.
18.The sun will shine and shine and shine and shine
19.iI love the winter time but only whan it snows.
20.I saw a bird fly over my head towards me.

Part2

Outside the window

1.The sky is grey. It cries,
but later its happy.

What I like to eat

2.Chicken is nice, but
hang on chips are better.

A recent dream

3.It felt so real. My hands, my head,
and my feet were shaking

Annoying tasks overdue

4.Work at school and chores at
home. There is no time to
breathe.

My Body

5.I run. I sweat. I lose control.
There is no place to go.