Love is the joy you recieve when you need it
Love is a toy you can just play with when you want it
Love is the pain you feel when you're having a fit
Love is...
Love is that new jacket that you loved oh so much
Love is that cushion you love to the touch
Love is that feeling of happiness and such
Love is...
Love is Saturdays when you just wanna chill
Love is when sometimes you're wanting to kill
Love is that chore you feel that you need to fulfill
Love is...
Love is the bed that you lay down your thoughts
Love is tha feeling of not wanting to get caught!
Love is a lesson you just want to be taught
Love is...
Love is the hurt you get when you're bruised
Love is the hurt you feel when you're used
Love is a rose that got wrongly abused
Love is...
A really strong attempt, although I can't help thinking lots of the rhymes are not half as good and natural as they could have been had they been the result of considerably more time (or maybe I am being unfair).
ReplyDeleteAlso, whilst some of your metaphors are great and fit the topic completely, many do not seem particularly linked to the title (e.g. "love is when you're wanting to kill" Is it???)
However, as I said before, good to have some sugadust back on the blog... :) Keep it up (and make sure you devote sufficient time to every task from now on...)