Keep himself inside
A soul urging to be free
I need to escape
Movement makes me strong
Wants the best but can’t show it
Can’t forget the past
Fed up with husband
Worry is with her all the time
Heart wants happiness
Jai
Ideal son to dad
Romance isn’t in his luck
Need to make her mine
Vina
Life got confusing
Need love to last forever
Wants a little more
Defensive father
Needs his little angel back
Wants to see her smile
Lata
Full of jealously
Can’t keep anything inside
Wants husband’s heart back
Almost perfect on the syllable front (apart from Line 2 of Lopa), and you manage the 'theme changes' each time with considerable skill and flair. You are at your best, here, however, when you write in the first person (you seem to flit between first and third throughout).
ReplyDeleteI especially like the final line of Lata - and also the first line of Eeshwar.
Well done, Angel_K.