I see a peek of her big ginger tail It comes from underneath the soft white rug I look at her in peace with such detail She sleeps and dreams in her nice bed so snug
Perfect iambic pentameters from start to finish! Well done!!! I am impressed beyond measure, and really proud of you too.
(Although, if I have to pick a hole in it somewhere, grumpy old teacher that I am, I would say it is a shame you have used a word as bland and useless as "nice")...
Hooray!!!! :)
ReplyDeletePerfect iambic pentameters from start to finish! Well done!!! I am impressed beyond measure, and really proud of you too.
(Although, if I have to pick a hole in it somewhere, grumpy old teacher that I am, I would say it is a shame you have used a word as bland and useless as "nice")...
Sir your evil. What's wrong with the word NICE???
ReplyDeleteU sound like my mum. LOL
:-)
WOW I CANT BELIEVE SOMEONE ACTUALLY GOT IT BECAUSE YOU GOT IT DOES THAT MEAN WE HAVE TO DO THE SONET NEXT WEEK WOOO HAY 4 U BOO HOO 4 US
ReplyDeleteNow now, Shani. You will get there too... All of you will.
ReplyDeleteNo sonnet yet. I need to get you ALL to a point where the IAMB is not causing any trouble first...
Thanks for the positive feedback.About the word nice,I used it because of the limited number of beats aloowed.
ReplyDeleteAm I forgiven?
I suppose so... :)
ReplyDeleteBut the next stage of the challenge, I guess, is to meet the demands of different meter WITHOUT sacrificing a rich and powerful lexicon (vocabulary).
I meant Vocabulary loool
ReplyDeleteSir ur so extra y not just say VOLCABULARY instead of making me look dumb??? lol
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