Saturday, 19 May 2007

Who am I?

I have troubles sometimes finding this
I like to think that I'm something good,
sometimes i think people take the piss
but they appreciate as they should

i HAVE trouBLES someTIMES findING this
i LIKE to THINK that I'M someTHING good
someTIMES i THINK peoPLE take THE piss
but THEY appREciATE as THEY should

PS: sorry about 'piss' i couldn't think of anything else
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3 comments:

  1. englishguru20 May 2007 at 08:01

    Let me re-write the second version, putting the STRESSED where they would fall TROCHAICALLY:

    I have TROUbles SOMEtimes FINDing THIS
    I like TO think THAT i'm SOMEthing GOOD
    SOMEtimes I think PEOple TAKE the PISS
    BUT they APPreCIate AS they SHOULD


    Lines 1 and 3 = perfect! :)
    Line 2: TO and THAT sound strange when stressed. How about: "LIKE to THINK that I am SOMEthing GOOD"?
    Line 4: The problem is "appreciate", which we say "appREciATE", but where you have put it in the trochaic line means that it would be "APPreCIate". How about: "DON'T appREciATE me AS they SHOULD"?

    Getting there... :)

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  2. sugadust25 May 2007 at 04:04

    jokinn... dat waz good =)

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  3. sugadust25 May 2007 at 04:04

    tut tut fatty,

    ur use of language was disgraceful :(

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