Part of me is sociable - the lies just ebb and flow
Part of me's negotiable- though most times it's a NO
Part of me is grinning- though I'm partial to a frown
Part of me's beginning- I'm already slowing down
Part of me's a big head- I need to be deflated
Part of me's quite well read- though my knowledge's rather dated
Part of me protests too much- I'll argue til I die
Part of me doth prefer Hutch- cos Stiller's rather dry
Part of me is childlike- will I ever grow?
And part me has got a plan
But most of me's for show
Part of me likes fruit and veg- fried with a Mars Bar
Part of me's on the edge- dont look down its rather far
Part of me is academic- P.P.E , at Ox(ford)
Part of me's without a blemish- due to the Botox
Part of me does like to rock-though not the climbing kind
Part of wont watch the clock-I'm always left behind
Part of me is on my own- wont see me take the fall
Part of me will never groan - my patience will enthral
Part of me is syllopsism- sub- concious ebb and flow
And part of has criticism
but most of me's for show
Wow
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this poem
Good use of technical words =]
well done!
Really relates to you. ;D
ReplyDeleteCan see it clearly.
Well done for keeping up the tempo and beat.
^^
Most of this is simply wonderful, my favourite lines being:
ReplyDelete"Part of me's negotiable- though most times it's a NO"
AND
"Part of me is syllopsism- sub- concious ebb and flow"
Very clever and thoroughly original: well done!
However, a couple of the lines read just a little awkwardly, largely because of the form your verb takes: i.e. "doth" in line 8, and "does" in Line 16. And I am also not sure about the use of "enthral" in Line 19. Do you see what I mean?