exercise 1
it seems the hunt has only just begun
hunter and pray alike go for their prize
and yet whilst one may want the others flesh
both are determined to finish champs
exercise 2
1.people are the same yet unique
2.by the forest people dance away
3.darkness rose behind the moon
exercise 3
1.picture a life: dark in the light
2.down in the forest seek the lion
3.kidulthood comes before adulthood
exercise 4
1.i want dinner right now.
2.death is murmuring here
exercise 5
the sky is choking on green house gas
and our planet is boiling up inside
heat is there but yet it cannot pass
and if it isn't changed we will be fried
exercise 6
if a partner is unfaithful just deal with it
you think that trust can mend all thats wrong
but it leads to many other issues so quit
yes stand alone, try and just be strong
Cool!!! ummm very creative How long did it take you? well its at the top of the heap on task 17 so people do notice it.
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annonnomus!
1.
ReplyDeleteLines 1 and 4 are perfect, but Line 2 starts with a stressed syllable, and Line 4 is missing a syllable.
2.
Lines 2 and 3 do not have the right number of syllables for this exercise, and Line 1, whilst it has the right number of syllables, ends with an iamb.
3.
Only Line 3 is spot on here. Can you see how it is totally different to Lines 1 and 2?
4.
Perfect!!! :)
5.
Line 1 = 2 iambs, 1 anapest, 1 iamb
Line 2 = 2 anapests, 2 iambs
Line 3 = an extra "the" at the start would have made this perfect.
Line 4 = perfect
6.
Right number of syllables, but the rhythm is a way off the anapests you mastered so perfectly in exercise 4... :(
You're perfectly capable of doing much better than this, Sparky, and I really think you owe it to yourself to up the ante a little with wordvoodoo - for all our sakes. What do you reckon?