I need you like a human needs clothes
I need you like a dog needs bones
I need you like Robin Hood needs arrows
so that he can shoot
and rob the loot
I need you like a computer needs a keyboard
I need you like a piano needs a chord
I need you like Mondeo needs Ford
So that its complete
And can still compete
I need you like an ear needs sound
I need you lost needs found
I need you like a king needs to be crowned
I need you...
I love you like a mum loves her son
I love you like Rambo loves action
I love you like a kid loves fun
So that they can enjoy
themselves with a toy
I love you like Harry loves magic
I love you like a clock loves to "tick"
I love you like builders love their bricks
So that they can build
And their cement is filled
I love you like a pen loves paper
I love you like bread loves butter
I love you like a farm loves its farmer
I love you...
I miss you like a baby misses its mother
I miss you like a computer misses its monitor
I miss you like a cook misses their cooker
Because without it the food
Won't taste good
I miss you like a boy misses his girl
I miss you like a women misses her pearl
I miss you like a hair misses its curl
Because it won't look pretty
And be a little dodgy
I miss you like departure misses arrival
I miss you like a chair misses its table
I miss you like a teacher misses their star pupil
I miss you...
I was really impressed by the way in which you rose to the demands of this task: structure, rhyme and similes are all very effective. Well done.
ReplyDeletePerhaps a few misfire a little (lines 18-19, 38...), but others more than make up for it: 'like departure misses arrival'...'like lost needs found'. Great!
Excellent work!! i loved it so so so much...!! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat use of effective and original similes.
Keep up the good work.
:D x