Betrayal is unimaginable; yet I went through it all. All the pain that you put me through, my pain dented the wall. He made me feel like total crap, and yet I got punished. How could I be so bloody stupid? At least now we’re finished!
Powerful poem, but the iambic rhythm is not quite there. You say you understand where you went wrong? How about giving it another try/a second draft then? :)
Sorry sir i was happy 2day so i decided to just do the task :D
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ReplyDeleteits all wrong because i think i understand that iambic thingy now
ReplyDeletePowerful poem, but the iambic rhythm is not quite there. You say you understand where you went wrong? How about giving it another try/a second draft then? :)
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