An author and her middle aged publisher sit in a London Cafe, drinking coffee and flicking through manuscripts.
Mrs Thane: So, do you like it?
Tory: It’s, different.
Mrs Thane: Different?
Tory: Different from the last one.
Mrs Thane: The whole concept was the capture the reader and to explain the ending in the last book. I mean, I understood the last book sold quite a few-
Tory: (chuckles) Great cafe by the way.
Mrs Thane: Great, cafe?
Tory: I mean, you’ve only lived in London for what, five years?
Mrs Thane: Yes but-
Tory: My aunt has lived in London for fifteen years, and she hasn’t the bloody foggiest idea where the City Airport is. You’re good.
Mrs Thane: (Leans towards Tory) Thank you, Tory. But I really don’t see what this has to do with my book.
Tory: Y’see that lady across the road there with the buggy?
Mrs Thane: (Sits back, hesitantly) Yes.
Tory: She’s a single mother, probably twenty five years old. Unable to keep herself and her child stable, she’s out looking for work, wondering where to start and when she’ll finish.
Mrs Thane: Right, a game! I love games. (Smiles) Man in a blue coat at the bus stop. He’s got a satchel, and he’s grey haired. He looks stressed. Teacher? (Shrugs shoulders)
Tory: (Shakes head) You should try the strawberry pavlova here, delicious.
Mrs Thane: You’ve been here before?
Tory: My mother. She used to take me to places.
Mrs Thane: She used to? What happened to her?
Tory: You ask a lot of questions.
Mrs Thane: My husband went out a lot.
(Long pause)
Tory: She had a heart attack.
Mrs Thane: Sorry.
Tory: Why London?
Mrs Thane: Because Cardiff was too beautiful. (Stares out of the window) Why publishing?
Tory: Seeing as I never knew what else was right for me, and I like to read. (Grins) And there was this girl.
Mrs Thane: Was she, blonde?
Tory: Not intending to be sarcastic Mrs T, but have you looked in the mirror lately?
Mrs Thane: Intention excused. (Smiles)
Tory: Nice to see you smile. Here. (Passes a croissant from the table)
Mrs Thane: Thanks.
Tory: You ever been to France?
Mrs Thane: I can speak French.
Tory: Vraiment?
Mrs Thane: Really.
Tory: About your book.
Mrs Thane: Okay.
Tory: Yes.
Mrs Thane: Is that a yes for publication?
Tory: No. It’s a yes for whether I liked the story or not.
Mrs Thane: So, now what?
Tory: Now I take it home and go through it with a fine tooth comb, see if I can get a few people’s thoughts and ideas.
Mrs Thane: Alright.
Tory: Okay.
Mrs Thane: Thanks for seeing me so quickly. I mean, Michael was a great publisher, but since he died, I mean, I thought I might as well try and find another from the same firm.
Tory: Yep.
Mrs Thane: Was the last one better then?
Tory: Maybe.
Mrs Thane: You’ve read it right?
Tory: Of course I have. (Smiles warmly)
Mrs Thane: Better be off then. (Gets up) Call me when you’re done, please.
Tory: Will do.
(She walks away)
Tory: Shame. Michael would have been proud.
(He gets up, leaving the manuscript and his full cup of coffee on the table.)
Sorry for the late posting. :)
ReplyDeleteWas on holiday in Singapore for the last few weeks.
Hope this post is the cliffhanger I wanted it to be.
It's a little on the long side, so I hope that doesn't let it down.
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Hi,
ReplyDeleteHave you met with a publisher or agent? If you haven't, this shows alot of spot-on imagination. It's good that with the talent you show, you have a realistic view of the publishing world. Really captures the frustration of depending on the opinion of others.
"Thane" is an excellent choice for the writer but "Tory" might be a little too direct. Leave a bit of scope for the reader to absorb rather than be "told."
Excellent jokes again.
Thanks.
Perhaps a little long, but the dialogue here is incredibly convincing and cleverly composed. So much scriptwriting does not seem to represent true conversation at all, precisely because true conversation is hard to fabricate - but you do so with flair and verve. Well done!
ReplyDeletePerhaps I'm being obtuse, but I'm not sure I get the cliffhanger... :(
Hi eternity forever, I must have missed this post.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot to take in here, it's good dialogue, but I feel I don't know the characters well enough to appreciate all the information you are revealing. There's plenty there of interest, lots of detail, maybe too much. I was left wondering about the cliff hanger too, I'm afraid.
It seems to me like there is an implied animosity on the publisher's behalf that Mrs Thane is oblivious to? He is obviously trying to avoid talking about the new book, or the issue of publishing it. I wanted a confrontation. The character's are well drawn and accurate, part of me was just thinking ...and?
It would be interesting to see another version of this, or maybe a piece acting as a pre-cursor to this one. Hope you had a good holiday.