Saturday, 22 December 2007

Haiku

Atul:

Unjustified man

Dad’s boring and outshone son

‘Dutt’ just isn’t me…

Eeshwar Dutt:

Elbow Game master

Reminice in the sweet past

My best friend is gone…

Lopa Dutt:

The past can’t erase

Clings onto my every thought

He was my TRUE love

Jai:

He is not worthy

Her beauty captivates me

But we cannot be…

Vina:

Consumate? My arse!

Maybe he doesn’t want me

I can’t escape now…

Laxman:

That canoodling cow

I wish she would disappear

Vina is my world.

Lata Patel:

Want the best for her

She is a grown woman now

I want to feel loved.

1 comment:

  1. These are EXCELLENT, chex - I am SO glad you caught up on this task, as you have really shone here.

    I like the way you have cut right through each and every discrete personality, but I especially like the opening to Vina's - possibly the only time I have read the word 'arse' in a haiku too!

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