Saturday, 22 December 2007

part of me

Part of me is always bright – the darkness never shown
Part of me’s a floating kite – I fly but I’m alone
Part of me is winter’s frost – the ice runs through my veins
Part of me’s fading, I’m lost – nothing inside remains
Part of me is teary – I let the river flow
Part of me is theory – there’s nothing I don’t know
Part of me is oh so sweet – your favourite dessert
Part of me’s unbreakable,
But most of me is hurt.

Part of me is a charade – all things aren’t what they seem
Part of me is a façade – my surface falsely gleams
Part of me you’ll never know – you see me in disguise
Part of me is all for show – It seems like I am wise
Part of me is bound in chains – I try, but can’t break free
Part of me has no real aims – can some one please help me?
Part of me’s oh so charming – some say that I’m a flirt
Part of me’s rather vengeful
But most of me is hurt.

2 comments:

  1. i know it's not finished but i WILL finish it and the others ARE coming.

    i didn't realize how far behind i was :|
    but i will do them (you have my oath as a girl scout - not that i ever was one LOL, but you get what i mean) :}

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  2. I can't wait for the rest of it, because what you have done is typically excellent. Take care with your meter (rhythm, feet etc.) though, because at times it is a trifle awkward (e.g. the penultimate line). Not to worry though - Task 17 should sort out any problems you are having in that regard! :)

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