Belief is a ‘dream come true’
Belief is a non-toxic glue
Belief is the sky bright blue
Belief is...
Belief is a miracle against all odds
Belief is a smile or just a simple nod
Belief is buying a unique hot rod
Belief is...
Belief is perfect fitting clothes
Belief’s a never dying rose
Belief is taking a few blows
Belief is...
Belief is never having to quit
Belief is a boy who doesn’t spit
Belief is me learning how to knit
Belief is....
Belief is a rainbow after a rainy day
Belief is snow after a hot summers day
Belief is switching time back to yesterday
Belief is...
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ReplyDeleteWell done that was a GREAT poem full of emotions.
ReplyDeleteA strong topic and a brilliantly managed poem.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
This is mostly fantastic - and original too. The rhythm of each line is well contained, and the tone is consistent too - which is no small achievement.
ReplyDeleteI particularly like Line 11 - it seems especially profound to me.
It is just Line 7 which lets the rest down a bit: it seems like you have written this just to rhyme? (Although I am happy to be persuaded it makes complete sense after all...)
sir a hot rod is a VER EXPENSIVE racing car lol so technically it does make sense :D
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